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©2005-2010 =goldenSalamander
:icongoldensalamander:

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Graphite drawing. This little guy is the son of Pegasus
Original drawing 6x11 inches.

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i am so lucky to love the one who loves me....
:heart: ~neleanor :heart:
You are never too old to rock`n`roll
if you are too young to die........
:iconhihoppingoose:
i love it soo much! it's soo adorable, the anatomy looks great, and the wings are beautiful! personally, i don't really see anything wrong. the only thing is that the background and foreground kind of faid together, but that is probably how u intended it to be. one of the best horse drawings! keep up the good work!

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BlArGhY
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Very nicely shaded and rendered..the feathers could have more detail..

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:iconkass-craven:
wow.. makes a change from seeing white pegasus.. :) it's amazing. :)

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' life is one big game.... does someone have the cheat code?'
:iconchihiro14:
O_o Ageh!! gasp! this is so pretty!! he's a soght for sore eyes, what a cutie!! :aww: Though his head seems a bit large, I guess that's a common trait in colts, now that I look at it it's nearly flawless O_o You are such an amazing artist ^^

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:iconponytail:
you did definitely a good job on it, I really like it!

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:icongoldensalamander:
:) thankee

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You need chaos in your soul to give birth to a dancing star.
Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche
:icongoldensalamander:
Thank you for your comments :hug:
I did mean for them to run together.
In a critique you don't have to just look for what was wrong. It also helps the artist to know what did work and what he did do well. It might be things he hadn't noticed worked well, or hadn't been sure if they were effective and if he had accomplished what he was trying to do. And see you did that in commenting on the anatomy and wings and surroundings. Thanks :)

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You need chaos in your soul to give birth to a dancing star.
Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche
:icongoldensalamander:
:) Thank you

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You need chaos in your soul to give birth to a dancing star.
Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche

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