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California Dreaming by =goldenSalamander:icongoldenSalamander:


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Submitted: April 23, 2008
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I did this a few years ago. I liked the vibrant colors and swoosh of lines up the hill, but decided the center of interest was off and cropped the right side and then after much consideration cropped half an inch off the bottom. Originally the texture of the grass, up the hill, had a more windblown, straight up the hill, look.

It was taken from a photo I took north of San Fransisco. I love those hills. My daughter and husband kept saying it looked like a hay stack and I let it set, wanting to do something more to it, but having trouble deciding. I thought a dragon flying over the hill, or maybe a house and tree just over the hill, or a man and boy walking up the hill. Finally, recently, I shifted the color of the hill more strongly beyond the original sunny orange and added more shifts and moves in the grass. And I added the girl and dogs, innocent dreamers on a sunny California day.

Those of you who know California will say that I didn't get the bushes/trees exactly right. And I didn't. That's because I couldn't remember exactly which they were when I got around to doing a drawing, and the scale was such that you really couldn't tell which they were.
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I really like this... and it doesn't matter about the plant life being right. This piece really speaks to me of what California should be, or more rightly, what it was... the feeling of sunny days is so strongly there even though I'm not anymore.

I live in Alaska now, I couldn't stand the cities and all the overdevelopment. This piece is all the best of the California... what a wonderful visit to an old memory of that place!
Regardless about the trees, this is so calming to look at! I love it!

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I especially love the clouds!

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I really like how the trees look. I also like what you've done with the clouds, which are difficult to capture by drawing. It's hard to get the fluffy look.

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As you said, I love the vibrant colors...For some reason I'm just not liking the feeling of depth on this one? Maybe push the hills on the right back more?

But overall I like it :) that's just a minor thing, the dogs are really cute! :D

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very nice :D great colors and the sky is really well done :thumbsup: it could also carry the name freedom ;)

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I really enjoyed the trip there, and driving around the coast of northern California. Driving over those hills was so different than over here in the middle of the country. It felt like we were driving off the world, driving to the top of one of those high rounded hills, topping it and going down the other side.

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Thanks, Glad you liked it. :)

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Thanks, me, too. They were fun. All the color was fun, too. :D

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Thanks, they were fun to do.

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